September 2011 Archives

Picture Perfect Picture Books

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Funny how when you've spent time collecting info on a topic, more info keeps popping up even when you thought you were done. At least that's how it often works for me. I posted this big resource for picture book writing, but now I have more to share.

First, some reminders courtesy of some of my students, a few critiques I've done recently, and the SCBWI Carolinas Conference last weekend.

Is it really a picture book? I know when I started writing, I often thought what I wrote was a picture book when it really was a magazine story. That's a pretty common error. This article by Jan Fields explains the difference well: "I Wrote it -- What is It?"

If after reading the article you are still unsure about your piece, create a storyboard or picture book dummy. (Links to "how to" directions are in previous post.) After you lay it out, think about what the illustrator could draw on each spread (a spread is a set of opposing pages). If the first spread's text indicates a child sitting on her bed, and so does the next, and the next, that doesn't give the illustrator much to work with. If the child is active, the illustrator has more opportunity to create interesting pictures.

Okay, so it is a picture book. What do you do about illustrations? Probably nothing. You do not illustrate the book yourself unless you are a professional illustrator. The publishing house will choose an illustrator. They often like to match an unknown writer with a known illustrator or vice versa. Even my friends who are author/illustrators don't necessarily illustrate every book they write. When someone takes your text and adds his own vision, the resulting blend of ideas creates something almost magical. If there's something not in the text that the illustrator must know, you may do a brief illustrator's note. i.e. desert setting.

I remember years ago Kathryn O. Galbraith talking about how picture book language must "sing." Have you read your text aloud? Do you stumble? Have you had someone else read it aloud? If they don't read it "right," you need to rewrite. Could you read it over and over and over to a child and not get bored? I love this quote by M.B. Goffstein: "It is tiresome to read a text that the author hasn't fought for, lost, and by some miracle when all hope is gone, found." Here's a great resource for while you are rewriting: Picture Book Editing Checklist from CBI Clubhouse.

And a few comments about rhyme from a Picture Book Panel at SCBWI Carolinas:
Lucy Cummins, Associate Art Director at Simon and Schuster and Paula Wiseman Books, talked about having to learn the term "scansion" (You can read about what that means here.). "Rhyme doesn't mean you have movement in the story," Lucy said. Check out this blog post on Lucy.

Rachel Orr, Agent at the Prospect Agency, asked, "Are you fixing things with your voice?" She suggests that if you have written a story in verse, to rewrite it in prose, then go back to verse.

Amy Lennex, Editor, Sleeping Bear Press said, "The rhyme must add to the story. It must make it a better book."

Recently a friend asked me for some picture book recommendations. I told her some authors and a few titles, plus a website where she could check out books. So what have you been reading lately that you'd recommend to my friend? Sure there can be some classics, but there better be some recently published picture books coming to your mind. I can name some illustrators whose work I like because of reading picture books. Can you? This is all part of market research and learning your craft.

Here are a few of my favorite picture books (a mix of new and old):
Chowder by Peter Brown
Froggy Eats Out by Jonathan London, illustrated by Frank Remkiewicz
Let's Play Rough! by Lynne Jonell, illustrated by Ted Rand
Mañana, Iguana by Ann Whitford Paul, illustrated by Ethan Long
Mirror Mirror: A Book of Reversible Verse by Marilyn Singer, illustrated by Josée Masse
Mostly Monsterly by Tammi Sauer, illustrated by Scott Magoon
Mrs. Chicken and the Hungry Crocodile by Won-Ldy Paye and Margaret H. Lippert, illustrated by Julie Paschkis

More Picture Book Resources

"The Basics of Writing a Picture Book" by prokidwriter
"How to Write a Picture Book" by Jennifer Lovvorn Parker
"How to Write Picture Books" by Robyn Opie
"How to Write a Picture Book That Shines" - video by Jon Bard
"Picture Book Guidelines: Learn How to Write for the Youngest Children" by Jennifer Jensen
"Picture Book Lessons, Grades 3-12" - this site is aimed at teachers who want to teach their students using the Six Writing Traits - but could be helpful for writers of picture books, too.

Links to Picture Book Awards

Caldecott Medal Winners - for picture book illustrations

The Charlotte Zolotow Award - for picture book text

Cybyls Award Winners - includes picture books

SCBWI Crystal Kite Awards 2011 - includes picture books

SCBWI Golden Kite Awards - check out awards for picture book texts and illustrations

49 brilliant picture books from the past 5 years as chosen by award winning illustrators

Bill Martin Jr. Picture Book Award (Kansas) - my current home

Washington Children's Choice Picture Book Award - my previous home

Many other states have awards as well. There are also country awards and other organization awards. Check with your local children's librarian.

Links to Picture Book Collections and Recommendations

Children's Picture Book Database at Miami University

Kids Corner: Favorite Picture Books (Summer 2011 Edition) by Rebecca Reid

The New York Public Library's "100 Picture Books Everyone Should Know"

Save the Picture Book by Bridget Heos

20 NEW Favorite Picture Books - Fall 2011 - posted by Imagination Soup


AND MORE RESOURCES courtesy of Tammi Sauer!
PICTURE THIS: A Daily Guide to Picture Book Writing with Rob Sanders
Marisa Montes Picture Book Writing


If you'd like to comment or share favorite picture book titles, and don't see a comment box, click on "Picture Perfect Picture Books" above, then scroll to bottom and the comment box should be there!


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The most perfect technique is that which is not noticed at all.
Pablo Casals

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P.G. Wodehouse

Humorous sheep and more - The Quest of the Warrior Sheep



warrior sheep.jpgOkay, here's another funny animal story--The Quest of the Warrior Sheep (Sourcebooks Jabberwocky, 2011) by Christine & Christopher Russell. The title almost says it all. I mean, warrior and sheep together in the same sentence is pretty funny.

But, of course, you want to know more. The story starts with 5 rare breed sheep, who are on a mission to save the great Lord Aries (king of Sheepdom) from Lambad, the bad. Mix in a dropped cell phone by bank robbers, the sheeps' owners--an old lady and her grandson, a farmer who thinks he saw aliens pick up the sheep, news reporters, and multiple means of transportation for a fun ride throughout the English countryside.

I love the sheep language. How can you not enjoy things like "Oh my grass!"? Each sheep has a unique personality, but you'll have to read it to see who says "omg." Colin Stimpson has done fun illustrations to go along with the text.

Not only is there an author site, but there's a warrior sheep site, too!
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I'm looking forward to reading the next book. The Warrior Sheep Go West (Egmont, 2011) where the sheep end up in the USA.

Funny pet story - Guinea Dog



guinea dog.jpgWhat do you do when you've always wanted a dog, but your mother gives you a guinea pig instead? In 5th grader Rufus' case he decides to keep Fido since she annoys his clean freak dad (the reason he can't have a dog). But then something strange happens. Fido starts acting like a dog.

Guinea Dog (Egmont, 2010) by Patrick Jennings is humorous and a bit bigger than life. Quite the enjoyable read. I know my 9 year old grandson would love it. (This book is available both in hardback and paperback.)

Be sure and visit Patrick's website and read his funny bio. There you can also read about his many other books.

P.S. Today, September 15th, Patrick wrote to me and said: "It was just announced today that the book won the Washington State Book Award. :)"

A BIG CONGRATS!

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Being a real writer means

Being a real writer means being able to do the work on a bad day.
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