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Do you struggle with grammar?

no duming.jpgYou're not alone.

One of my favorite resources is a book by Harry Shaw called Errors in English and How to Correct Them. If you're in doubt on whether to use who or whom or how to punctuate when using quotes or the difference between effect and affect, this book explains it in an easy to read way.

Sometimes, we need help though to get something fixed in our brain. I'll list a grammatical problem and then a site I recommend to students for help with that particular issue.

Adverbs - Been told you're overusing those "ly" words? This site is useful to paste your text in and have it show them to you. It also works on other grammar issues, such as passive verbs. http://editminion.com/

Future in the Past Tense - An example of this is "would get" versus "got." http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/futureinpast.html

Passive Verbs - Been told to watch out for passive verbs ending in "ing?"
This article on the ICL website is helpful: http://www.institutechildrenslit.com/rx/ws05/goodverbs.shtml
This one explains the difference between active and passive: http://www.towson.edu/ows/activepass.htm

Run-on Sentences - I've got two helpful sites for this problem:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
http://www.myenglishteacher.net/runonsentences.html

Sentence Fragments - This site offers a quiz.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/fragments.htm

Verb Tense Consistency - This educational site has a verb consistency test. You can answer the questions then check your answers which is pretty useful.
http://www.towson.edu/ows/exercisetenseconsistency.htm

Which English is it? Spelling and grammar different from country to country. - Here is a wonderful chart that outlines the subtle differences between British, Canadian, and American English: http://www3.telus.net/linguisticsissues/BritishCanadianAmerican.htm

I know this isn't a complete list of grammar problems, but they are definitely ones I see commonly in student assignments.

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Illustrator Resources

boy illustration.jpgThis collection is for my new illustrator friends--especially those who are just starting out.

In Print

Writing with Pictures: How to Write and Illustrate Children's Books by Uri Shulevitz

How to Write and Illustrate Children's Books and Get Them Published edited by Treld Bicknell

How to Write, Illustrate, and Design Children's Books by Frieda Gates

Illustrating Children's Books: Creating Pictures for Publication by Martin Salisbury

On the Web

The Blackwing Diaries by Jenny Lerew - follow her link to her sketchbook, too

Children's Illustration Agents composed by Phyllis Cahill

Coretta Scott King Book Awards

Directory of Children's Illustration

The Drawing Board for Illustrators

Dummies for Smarties on Yellapalooza - other good articles on this site, too

Ezra Jack Keats - looking at how he put together his picture books

Gouache Resist by Laura McGee Kvasnosky

How I developed the idea for From Head to Toe by Eric Carle

How to be a Children's Book Illustrator

How to Illustrate a Children's Book - 3 articles
http://blog.illustrationcastle.com/2006/09/19/how-to-illustrate-a-childrens-book/
http://www.wikihow.com/Illustrate-a-Children's-Book
http://www.ehow.com/how_2068096_illustrate-childrens-book.html

How to Make a Storyboard

Mighty Art Demos - search by art medium, category, or artist's name

Picture Book Database

Starting Out: Tips for Beginning Illustrators on Yellapalooza

Temple of the Seven Golden Camels


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Thanks to Xenia from morguefile for the above image.

Nancy I. Sanders on Writing Nonfiction

June 5 Sanders.jpgI keep running into writers who want to write nonfiction and have more questions than I can answer, so here's an interview with Nancy I. Sanders who is well-established in this area:

What led you to write nonfiction?
In my book, Yes! You Can Learn How to Write Children's Books, Get Them Published, and Build a Successful Writing Career, I explain a strategy I call the "Triple Crown of Success." For this I always recommend writers be working on three separate manuscripts to meet three separate goals:
1) the goal to get published,
2) the goal to earn income, and
3) the goal of writing for personal fulfillment.
As I started to build my writing career, I discovered I could earn nice income writing nonfiction so I always try to be working on at least one nonfiction project while I'm working on manuscripts to meet my other two goals.

How do you usually get to write nonfiction books? Do you come up with the idea first or does the publisher? Or does it vary?
Sometimes a publisher sends an idea my way. The way I got the idea to write Frederick Douglass for Kids, however, was very typical of the way I come up with ideas for nonfiction books. I was browsing through a current catalog of this publisher and exploring the titles of their "For Kids" series. I noticed they had various famous Americans in their series such as George Washington for Kids and Benjamin Franklin for Kids. I realized they had a hole in their series and didn't yet have a title on Frederick Douglass, one of the greatest leaders in America. So I queried the publisher and asked if they'd like to see a proposal on a potential new title called Frederick Douglass for Kids. They said "Yes!" and the rest is history.

What chances does a nonfiction children's writer have of writing another book about a topic that already has numerous books written about it?
Actually, the chances are quite good, if you do your homework.

First, check the product line of the publisher you'd like to target. If they already have a book on this topic, perhaps they'd like one written with a fresh, unique angle.

And if your publisher doesn't yet have a book on the topic you want to write about...chances are that if it's a common topic, your publisher would like to have a book in their product line written on that topic, too! That was the case with this book.

In the books you write, do you use both primary and secondary sources?
It depends on each project. For this book, I used numerous primary sources that included Frederick Douglass's autobiographies as well as many little-known books written by African American solders who fought during the Civil War as well as African American women who supported the troops as nurses or spies. I found amazing facts and stories I'd never read in any other history book about the Civil War! Plus I had lots of secondary sources of more current books that helped give an overview about the history of this era.

Do you have any favorite "go to" sources when you start a new project?
I like to gather other children's nonfiction books on my new topic. This helps me develop my outline by referring to the table of contents in these books. Children's books capture the top ten essential ingredients about a topic, so they're great resources for developing an outline and a proposal in a short amount of time.

Then, if the proposal is accepted, I gather encyclopedias and primary sources on my topics to really dig in depth. Since I specialize in writing African American history for kids, I own over 200 research books in my own personal library that I've built over the years. It's so helpful when I start a new project because I already have these resources at hand. My favorite resource is numerous books by Dr. Henry Louis Gates, Jr. including his encyclopedia set I own, African American National Biography.

How do you organize your research notes? On 3x5 cards, a notebook, on your computer?
The system that works best for me is that I first sit in a comfortable chair to read research books and jot down notes by hand on paper for about an hour to start my day.

Then I move over to my computer and type these notes into an ever-growing working outline. Then I print out these notes and other important notes such as information I've found and printed out from the Internet that day. I store these notes each day in a file folder, one file folder per chapter (or section within a chapter for a really long book). I store all these file folders in a pocket folder for handy reference when I need something from a specific chapter that I've printed out. This usually takes me another hour.

Then I sit at my computer and type new material for my book project for another hour or so, based on the research I just did.

This gives me at least 3 solid hours of writing each day.

Do you have any advice you'd give to someone who is just starting out and wants to write nonfiction?
Don't be a "Lone Ranger" writer. Learn how to be a "piggyback" writer. I explain all about how this works in my book for children's writers, Yes! You Can Learn How to Write Children's Books... In a nutshell, if you want to experience breakthrough as a nonfiction writer, study publishers' catalogs and look for series that are written by multiple authors and the copyright to each book is in the author's name. Brainstorm 3-5 ideas for topics that can fit within that series. Then send a query to that publisher asking if they'd like to see a proposal on any of those topics to fit into their current series.

Not only does this help you land a contract to write a nonfiction book, but when your book comes out, everyone who is already buying the other books in the series will buy yours too, and you'll see great sales! This is what I call being a "piggyback" writer. It's in stark contrast to what I refer to as a "Lone Ranger" writer who just tries to find a publisher for her own idea and if it does get published has to try to market it on her name or that title alone with slow sales as a result.

What are you doing to celebrate the release of your book, Frederick Douglass for Kids?
I'm hosting a two-week virtual Book Launch Party! There are prizes to win, fun facts to learn, and lots of inside peeks and helpful tips about how a book is born. Stop by my site today to join in the party.

FrederickDouglassCover.jpgBook Synopsis
Few Americans have had as much impact on this nation as Frederick Douglass. Born on a plantation, he later escaped slavery and helped others to freedom via the Underground Railroad. In time he became a bestselling author, an outspoken newspaper editor, a brilliant orator, a tireless abolitionist, and a brave civil rights leader. He was famous on both sides of the Atlantic in the years leading up to the Civil War, and when war broke out, Abraham Lincoln invited him to the White House for counsel and advice.

Frederick Douglass for Kids follows the footsteps of this American hero, from his birth into slavery to his becoming a friend and confidant of presidents and the leading African American of his day. And to better appreciate Frederick Douglass and his times, readers will form a debating club, cook a meal similar to the one Douglass shared with John Brown, make a civil war haversack, participate in a microlending program, and more. This valuable resource also includes a time line of significant events, a list of historic sites to visit or explore online, and web resources for further study.

More About Nancy
Nancy I. Sanders is the bestselling and award-winning author of over 80 books including America's Black Founders, A Kid's Guide to African American History, and D Is for Drinking Gourd: An African American Alphabet. She teaches other writers how to launch their career to the next level based on material found in her book for writers mentioned above. Nancy's writing buddies, Sandman and Pitterpat (who just happen to be cats--see picture above) help bring laughter to her days. You can visit their site for practical tips, writing worksheets, and a light-hearted look at the writer's life.

See what's happening at Nancy's launch party.

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Perfecting Dialogue Punctuation

talking.jpgDo you struggle with the proper punctuation for what people say in your stories? You're not alone. Many writers labor to get this right. Let's start with a review of the rules.


Punctuation Rules for Dialogue

1. Start with a quote (") when someone begins speaking.

2. If what the person said is followed by an attribution (i.e. he said), end the dialogue with a comma and another quote mark(,").
"I went to the store," Ralph said.

3. When what was said is a question, use a question mark, quote mark (?").
"Would you please buy milk?" Mom asked.

4. If instead of an attribution (i.e. she said), there's an action, the dialogue will end with a period and a quote. (.")
"Look what I found at the mall." Mary pulled earrings out of the paper sack.

5. If a question has an action, still use the question mark, quote mark (?").
"Would you please buy milk?" Mom handed me a five.

6. After an action or an attribution when the same person starts speaking again, use another beginning quote.
"I went to the gym," Hector said. "Manuel and I played horse."

7. Quotation marks come in pairs, a left and a right. ("...") A quote mark without it's mate is incorrect.
8. If the person speaking addresses someone by name, their name is separated by a comma.
"Hey, John, come here."

9. Each sentence does NOT have a quote mark at the beginning and end when the same person continues speaking, unless interrupted by an action or an attribution.
"We went to Grandma's house. I played with her dog. The cat ran."

10. Generally, what one person says is all in one paragraph.
"I took my basketball to the gym," Hector said. "Manuel and I played horse. Then Tommy and Kate showed up so we played two on two." Hector smiled. "Manuel and I won."

11. Start a new paragraph when a new person speaks.
"Hey, Mama?" I asked. "Can I go to the park?"

"Yes, you may." She looked at her watch. "Dinner is in an hour. Make sure you are back in time, Danika."

"My stomach will remind me." I grinned and she grinned back.

Mainly, it takes practice, practice, practice to get the rules set in your brain. Here are a few suggestions that might help you engrain these rules.

Practicing Dialogue Punctuation

1. Print out your short story or chapter of your book. Take different colored highlighters or colored pencils and mark what one person says in one color. Exclude any actions, punctuation, or he said or asked, etc. Use another color for another person's dialogue. When everyone's dialogue is colored, look for these things:
• Quote marks at beginning and end of what each person says.
• Comma or question mark within quote mark right before an attribution (i.e. he asked, she shouted).
• Period, question mark or exclamation mark--use the latter sparingly--within quote mark when it is followed by an action (i.e. Dad slammed the door.).
• Is what someone says all in one paragraph before someone else speaks? Or before a change of scene?
• Comma(s) separating the name of a person being spoken to.

2. Take a published short story or book chapter with lots of dialogue and retype it to get the flow of how punctuation, action, dialogue, etc. mix in.

3. Turn on your word processor's "Grammar Checker." It can be very annoying as it usually isn't set up for fiction, but it may help point out where your punctuation is wrong. Use the help option in your word processor to find out how to turn it on and how to customize it for your version of the software.

A lot of work? Yes. But work on it enough and the rules of dialogue punctuation will come automatically to your fingertips.

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Do as I Say


(Picture courtesy of Mary R. Vogt on morguefile.com)frothocamel.jpg

Have you ever found yourself telling a kid, "Don't talk with food in your mouth," and then realized you were doing the same? I once caught myself out when I reread an article I'd written on character development. Among the suggestions were questions to ask yourself about the character. I realized I couldn't answer any of them for the main character on my current work-in-progress. Ouch! I wish I could say I was only on page one of my novel.

I know some writers write totally organically and learn their character as they go, but I know I need more. So why do I keep trying to do without the preparation? I wish I knew. I may have to make a sign to go above my computer, "Do you know who your character is?"

Or maybe it's that I always have to get to a certain stage in a story before I care enough about all those details of my character to find them out. Of course, that definitely can cause major rewriting.

I've heard writers explain how they write very detailed bios of their characters, major and minor, before writing any of the story. Others fill out complex charts. For me that would be telling the character who they are more than discovering who they are.

On one work-in-progress I discovered my main character's initials didn't stand for what I thought they did. I'd given JD his name a long time ago, when his story idea was only a glimmer of an idea. I decided the J stood for Joshua. When pre-planning a scene in my head, another character asked JD what his initials stood for. He answered, "Jonah David." Whoa! Time out! Where did that come from? But it felt . . . right.

So where does that leave me? Not totally in control.

But I think I need to work on a balance for this dichotomy. Some pre-planning, some organic, followed by more planning, followed by more organic. And, flexibility.

So don't do as I say, or as I do. Instead figure out the best way for you to work out this issue of character development in your own work. Though if you have any tips, I'd love to hear them.

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Do you struggle with grammar?

Illustrator Resources

Nancy I. Sanders on Writing Nonfiction

Perfecting Dialogue Punctuation

Do as I Say

Professional Problem Maker

4 Ways to Make Your Characters "Talk Different"

Picture Book Month

Picture Perfect Picture Books

Picture Book Resources

My Favorite Online Resources

Do as I Say

Attribution or Action?

Turning Ideas Into Stories - Workshop

Theme and Premise

Self-Editing Tips

The Story Ladder or Novel Timeline

Showing Versus Telling

Read, Read, Read

The Power of a Good First Line

Hooking your Reader

Listen to the Voices

DIALOGUE TIPS

Viewpoint in Children's Fiction

Making Friends: Character Development